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True Love's Rose

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The rose in the vase speaks your name
And proves your love is true
Although it will soon wither and die
I know, one day, we will too

The fake rose that was once given to me
Still lasts throughout the years
But the ‘love’ that came with that flower
Only brought me lots of tears …

Although it only lasts for a while
True love’s rose speaks of the divine
Unlike so many fakes ones
It will bloom in my heart for all time
Well, if I say so myself, I reckon this isn't bad seeing as I wrote it in less than 5 minutes!!! Thanks for the inspiration GhostOfTheEmptyGrave!! :-)
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Larathain's avatar
I wrote a piece about a rose in bloom for someone whom is the most dear to me, but I doubt she knows how I feel. This piece was so breathtakingly beautiful and though it is short, conveys a proper scene and imagery that touches the soul tenderly and sends sharp spikes of lingering lightning throughout the singularity of the skin. Well done! Continue creating! ^~^